This adventurous story has an interesting concept. Passing a diary down from generation to generation is something all families should do – that way the story can be told as it happened. “Sally Ann’s Diary” is a good story that could be expanded into a series like “Little House on the Prairie”.

To Author: The story-line is good but needs more dialogue. The story could be more adventurous and in-depth. This is a story about a family moving across country. It could use more details.