This script is well written and the story is based on the Exodus account of Moses. Although some plot elements are filled in a bit, for example the story of Moses killing an Egyptian, all of the Biblical accounts are expanded in a logical way which does no harm to the integrity of the scriptures. The dialog is well written and the story moves along very quickly.

NOTE TO THE WRITER: I was impressed by the grammar, spelling, and the power of this written script. The plot moves along swiftly. I know it may be difficult to get it filmed, considering the Robert Halmi father and son team just aired a version of “The Ten Commandments” a year ago on TV. But be it far from me to discouarage you as this is a nicely written script. We wish you the best.